Essay topics: Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say- Why did you move there- Describe the new apartment- Invite him/her to visit you

Essay topics:

Essay topics: Essay topics: You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
- Why did you move there
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him/her to visit you

Hi! How are you? I am fine and hope this missive of mine finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to invite you to visit in my new apartment.

Yes, I am working in a software development company which is situated in the outskirt area of the city and my old apartment was in the city centre. Due to this, I had to face a plethora of problems such as traffic congestion etcetera. To overcome myself from this problem I recently shifted to a new apartment which is near to my organisation.

Even though, my new apartment is not too big as my old one, but I am satisfied with it. Primarily, it is well equipped and containing two bedrooms along with one bathroom, kitchen and a little garden.It gives me the opportunity Who is it in the great ambience which will not only relax my body but also my mind.

Finally, I shifted to my new house, last Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are invited, so it will be a great time to get together after a long time. It would be very grateful if you come at that party to make it perpetuate to all of us.

Pay my regards to your family.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ast Sunday. I intend to organise a party in which all our college friends are inv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21681415929 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48195381922 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3642488522 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159801737979 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713035437996 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664949809966 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882525766552 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727824355129 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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