You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say
- Why did you move there
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him/her to visit you
Dear Sarah,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. The good news is that I got a promotion and so I have moved from Phagwara to Chandigarh.
You know very well that I have been working with the HDFC Bank for the last five years. My promotion was long overdue. Last month I got my promotion and along with that I also got a transfer to the head office at Chandigarh.
Chandigarh is a very nice and beautiful city. In fact, it is the most well-planned city of Punjab. I got my accommodation through the bank in sector 35. I moved in two weeks ago. It is a beautiful apartment. There are two bedrooms, a hall and a kitchen. The shopping center is very near. My bank is also in this sector only. So, I just walk there. I don’t need to take out my car.
Why don’t you come over for a few days? I am sure you will like it here. We would visit all these places together and also share some nostalgic memories of our college years. Hoping to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Kiran
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30927835052 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41404470981 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0107584816 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.0 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.2105263158 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159510418709 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045193168168 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549712737677 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970856902531 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615602074475 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.24 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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