Essay topics: You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr Jonson,
I am writing because I have seen a newspaper advertising about a quality certification course that I need to improve my profile in the company and I would like to enrol it.
The course name is "quality audits certification" which is focused on the international normativity and standards approved around the world, and I have heard that institute this is the best in quality audits training.
I would like to ask you if the company could support me with the cost of the course and or with some time off to be able to attend.
As you have been noticed, my tasks for the company are been affected by the lack of this training in my academic profile. However, I am convinced that taking, I will give effective support to the company in the quality audits field.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
David Valderrama
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92052980132 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92589346938 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4582115133 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237207795584 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960060075928 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377557147435 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104483829821 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301664473799 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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