Dear Sarah Jones,
I hope the following advice will help you solve some problems when your tertiary education starts in Australia next year.
Regarding the accommodation problems, It would be great to consider living with a host family. A host family can help you immerse yourself in local culture and delicious homemade food. If you have your heart set on a wild partying experience, accordingly, if you're studying abroad to immerse yourself truly, a host family offers every advantage.
There are many jobs in inner-city Sydney; therefore, While you can search and apply online for a part-time position, many vacancies are filled informally by just walking in and handing the manager your resume when you find an establishment that looks interesting to you. Taking my application as a prime example, When I walked around the city center, I brought my resume to hand out in shops and restaurants. With this method, I was called in for many interviews and hired for two different marketing positions.
Many language academies and institutions taught the English language to foreigners for language purposes, but I would like you to learn English from my teacher (Professor James Anthony). He is worked at Western Sydney University, teaching English to foreigners. Besides that, living in a host family can offer a fantastic opportunity to learn the language.
I would be happy to offer any additional advice you may require. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you have any further queries.
Regards,
Phạm Khánh Linh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ld partying experience, accordingly, if youre studying abroad to immerse yourself tru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20080321285 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78354685512 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2858084314 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159322426753 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491544170511 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453978650941 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863101430879 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299154048179 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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