formal letter in English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Offer to find a place for him / her to live. 2. Give advice about how to find a part time job. 3. Give information on where they can learn your language.
Dear Sarah Jones,
I hope the following advice will help you solve some problems when your tertiary education starts in Australia next year.
It might be helpful to your advantage to solve the accommodation problem. It would be great to rent a local family excited to meet and help you adapt to a new environment as soon; otherwise, if you prefer to stay in Hotel or school dormitory, I'll book you a fitting room where you can be more independent.
There are lots of jobs in the city of your choice. You can find a job on official restaurant websites or any company sites, which you want to apply; therefore, there are numerous jobs to work. Moreover, many websites help find a required job according to your specifications, such as Career one, so on; hence, you can easily find a job here. Also, you could manage easier than your studies along with your job.
Next, for language purposes, you don't need to worry about it. There are many language academies and institutions that taught the English language to foreigners. But I would like you to learn English from my teacher (Professor James Anthony). He is a certified IELTS teacher and worked in Western Sydney University, teaching English to foreigners.
I hope these suggestions will be of help to you. Please let me know exactly when you're coming so that I can meet you at the airport. It'll be great to see you again.
Regards,
Phạm Khánh Linh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...r to stay in Hotel or school dormitory, Ill book you a fitting room where you can b...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... job. Next, for language purposes, you dont need to worry about it. There are many ...
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Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...to you. Please let me know exactly when youre coming so that I can meet you at the ai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7044534413 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58017690391 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3027936369 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141303488895 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553483345267 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497523285344 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830647294287 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438527052977 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.