In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this How can people research this | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?

In modern time, most of individuals want to discover more deeply than about the annals of the house where they reside in. there are many reasons why they have to know about that; accordingly, they are found many information out relating to their apartment by some way.
On the one hand, there are many opinions is concerned about the causes why they have to study the problem. First, if a family is living in their ancestral house, finding out the history of their house helps they understand more than; furthermore, the household will have detailed more their family knowledge what the occasions were morphed the intimate development into the large family tree at the present. Besides that, parent usually teach their children about descending where their ancestor came from and how to came into existence until now, so that discovering historic house is so necessary. Second, a nuclear family don’t want to attach to their senior parent; accordingly, buying house is more difficult than normal with them because they need to oversee background combine with manufacture of the new house which they want own. Furthermore, family members will have live in the place for a long time, so researching need to have that it have safety enough to be alive. Accordingly, people who want to reside in the location will study ex-owner deeply, and avoid to be cheated.
On the other hand, when they want to find out some information about their home, there are many ways to research this problem. First, they can expert on good website or make friend with neighbors surround the place. However, the information source is not really correct because it is only words by oral transmission, and don’t have any evidence to demonstrate what they said. Secondly, household can be based on the real estate companies or their adult members; in particularly, the real estate brands will provide all information about their house where people who buys the house want to discover carefully and make a best decision to choose their house where they want.
In conclude, discovering a house where a family reside in is necessary for each household. It’s not only helps us remember to descend where they went and have more information than about ancestor. Furthermore, researching the history of their buildings, houses lives in is not difficult, if you go to the real estate cooperates or ask senior parents at home.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
In modern time, most of individuals want to discover more deeply than about...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...about that; accordingly, they are found many information out relating to their apart...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...about that; accordingly, they are found many information out relating to their apartment by some...
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Line 2, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amily tree at the present. Besides that, parent usually teach their children abou...
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Line 2, column 690, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their senior parent; accordingly, buying house is more difficult than normal with...
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Line 2, column 835, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...facture of the new house which they want own. Furthermore, family members will ha...
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Line 2, column 929, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he place for a long time, so researching need to have that it have safety enough ...
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Line 2, column 1071, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid being'.
Suggestion: avoid being
...ocation will study ex-owner deeply, and avoid to be cheated. On the other hand, when they ...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...use want to discover carefully and make a best decision to choose their house whe...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Furthermore, researching the history of their buildings, houses lives in is not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, in particular, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99002493766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56372201457 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498753117207 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0387615903 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276779741395 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096448373995 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485225870069 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183255121035 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141135496776 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, in particular, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments