A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. (Informal Letter)
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Give contact details for when you are away
Give instructions on how to care for your pet
Describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
Hi dear John,
I’m writing this letter to let you know some information about the flat. First of all, I should thank you again for your kindness, I know you are super busy, and it means a lot to me to look after my apartment while I’m out of the city.
The points you should bear in mind are first, because of these recent blackouts that we’ve had, my air conditioning stopped working yesterday without any special reason. I had got it two months ago, though. I’ll deal with it when I’m back; there was no time for that! Another thing you should know is that the water heater crashes from time to time, so if you happen to needed hot water and the heater didn’t run, just call Mr. Brown, the building manager, he knows how to fix it.
As we’ve discussed over the phone, I can’t take my dog with me, so please take good care of him. If you could feed him every morning, that would be great. Also, the plants in the flat don’t need watering every day. You can do the watering every other day.
Finally, In case of having an emergency, you can call my sister, who lives downtown. Here is her number: 5874235874. Feel free to call her if a problem comes up.
Again, thank you so much, I will never forget it,
Jason
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so, while, another thing, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39393939394 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05802158852 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692640692641 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0525055354 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172314409086 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509899468092 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059222837141 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911148848356 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087557932511 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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