A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions on how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Ricky,
hope you are doing well. I am much obliged for looking after my house and pet while I am away on this short vacation to Malaysia. In case of emergency, I am always reachable on +61756483048.
First of all, you need to feed my dog Rico three times a day. The pedigree is kept on the kitchen refrigerator. Apart from this you need to give him water plenty of times as he feels thirsty. if he doesn't eat dog food then, in that case, there is some minced chicken in the freezer, boil it and serve it to him. Secondly you need to take him for short walks in morning and evening. For grooming Mark, my friend will come tomorrow and take him along.
Thirdly you need to keep an eye on the maid and check if she is mopping the house properly. The cooking gas in the kitchen is also finishing, so you need to collect the cylinder from the SP gas services, I believe they will come on Friday.
I hope you enjoy this short stay at my home and I look forward to seeing you soo.
Warm wishes
vin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ricky, hope you are doing well. I am much oblig...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e on +61756483048. First of all, you need to feed my dog Rico three times a d...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...er plenty of times as he feels thirsty. if he doesnt eat dog food then, in that ca...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nty of times as he feels thirsty. if he doesnt eat dog food then, in that case, there ...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to seeing you soo. Warm wishes vin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21134020619 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18562171688 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0117425764 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8461538462 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15120710553 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509390995126 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042894011808 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094639001557 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230918593105 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.