You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
1. Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Mike,
hope you are doing well?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am glad to know that you have completed your graduation and now you are seeking advice on whether to continue college or go for a job.
I can understand that you are at a crucial juncture of your career, making a wrong choice at this stage will not only hamper your future prospects but also prove to fatal for career development. Since you have just finished you tertiary education I believe going back to college in the same environment will make you feel disinterested or bored at a certain stage.
Secondly, I am aware of your present financial condition, so I suggest to go for a job as it will not only give you financial stability but also provide you with an exposure and a learning experience which will be beneficial for your career growth.
Moreover, the trend nowadays is that most of the students after completing their graduation gain some experience with multinational companies which gives them a definitive advantage while applying for post-graduation in reputed colleges, so I would suggest doing the same.
Since you have completed your bachelors in Computer Engineering, you could explore a variety of jobs in the software domain like testing, programming.
I hope you will consider my suggestion seriously and make the right decision.
Warm wishes
Tesla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, hope you are doing well?. It has been a ...
^^^
Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest going', 'suggest gonna'.
Suggestion: suggest going; suggest gonna
... your present financial condition, so I suggest to go for a job as it will not only give you ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d make the right decision. Warm wishes Tesla
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93534482759 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81295824646 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4254108666 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206964266689 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839823363307 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729507417111 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111343217914 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620854085857 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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