A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter⦁give contact details for when you are away⦁give instructions about how to care for your pet⦁describe other household duties

Dear John,

Hope my letter will find you in the warmth of life. First of all, I anterior both my thanks and sorry for accepting my request to take care of my cat while I am out and to trouble you much.

To commence, I have already bought busicuit for my cat and kept in the drawer near the mantel piece in lounge room and milk in the fridge. Pour a cup of milk in the cat’s bowl thrice a day and busicuits in the evening. Mostly, I will be available on my personal number but in case of emergency, I have cited down the numbers and address of the place I will be staying and sticked it on the fridge.

Despite that, please water my plants in the morning. I’ve already pour enough water in the indoor plants so they need not to be watered till a week now. And please clear my mail box daily for the safety reasons.

Thank you once again.
See you soon.
Neha

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...r in the indoor plants so they need not to be watered till a week now. And please cle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21893491124 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10562776599 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0117633493 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845168604985 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408761235856 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037253540379 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552779919291 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393889921854 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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