Game are always fun when played with spirit and enthusiasm. While some people believe sports/ leisure activities or amateur games are enjoyed most only when one is at the winning team, this essay, on the other side, is against it. Later, this essay will discuss relaxation and to make new friends as two main reasons in disagreement with the aforementioned statement.
To embark, until playing professionally, games are played to relax. For example, after a tiring day in school or in office, one spends time with family either by talking to them or taking them for an outing or by engaging everyone in a common activity like playing games. Earlier outdoor games were more popular but now people are seen to be enjoying indoor games like video games more. However, tiredness and dullness are common symptoms when such activities are played with the feeling of competition. Conversely, it should be a path to vitality. Hence, instead of worrying about winning and losing such activities should be enjoyed thoroughly as its repercussions are inevitable.
Another reason of playing games is to make new friends. To put an example, Oxford research 2014 states- friendship is much stronger and long-lasting if both of them share a common interest. Moreover, one of the most ferocious sports WWE teaches us ”you do not fail when you fall down but you fail when you refuse to get up again”. Therefore, one who does not give up even after losing a few times, will not only win one day but also end up making many friends.
To recapitulate, when you play to win you are nervous throughout and can never have fun. On contrary, when you have fun while playing, you are already a winner.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65751603816 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5798160606 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434575768948 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138362892826 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116756295874 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263973560586 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909986919903 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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