A friend who lives in another country has invited you to came and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend
In your letter.
• Thank him/her for the invitation
• Explain why you cannot come
• Ask him about other times to visit
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting me to stay with you for the upcoming holiday. It's really kind of you but unfortunately, I won't be able to come because of my hectic work schedule.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. As you already know, I recently started a new job and also leading a major project. The release date of this project is in three weeks and I have to work around the clock. This assignment is really important for creating a good impression in a new organization.
Could you please let me know about some other time when you will be free? I would love to visit your new house and it's been a long time since I met your parents. I am free next month and can plan a vacation in the first week of next month because of a long weekend.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your friend,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...stay with you for the upcoming holiday. Its really kind of you but unfortunately, I...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ext month because of a long weekend. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28395061728 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36022132835 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8784858008 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0909090909 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28292894585 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099892510701 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980917022886 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150874296511 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908935381963 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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