Dear Rida,
Hope this letter finds you radiant health and best spirit. I have received your letter yesterday on dated 21-March-2019. You mentioned that letter you want to do job but why? According to my information you are studying in abroad and it is a good way for career development. Even, you will achieve best opportunity after completion your master degree.
However, I inform you that i have job opportunity for you. In Bank Alhabib is starting Management Training program in next month and good news is that you are eligible for this post. Furthermore, It is one of the best program for new comer who start there career with banking industry.
You have idea about banking field. It is most secure job but you will follow some rules and regulation regarding banking field which provide you best accommodations and best salary package. Even you can continuous your further study.
kindly send me your updated resume. I will forward it to my manager.
Your quick response would be appreciable.
Yours best friend,
Sarah.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I have received your letter yesterday on dated 21-March-2019. You mentioned that ...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the best'.
Suggestion: achieve the best
... for career development. Even, you will achieve best opportunity after completion your maste...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...more, It is one of the best program for new comer who start there career with banking ind...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'you the best'.
Suggestion: you the best
...n regarding banking field which provide you best accommodations and best salary package....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kindly
... can continuous your further study. kindly send me your updated resume. I will for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05780346821 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63823286411 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0275203452 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5333333333 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459855784776 0.216113520407 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160437664144 0.0766984524023 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870754156073 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211414185359 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119015483592 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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