It is often argued that,Sports and music are not necessary. It is irrefutable that Education is a key of success.However, I personally believe that, Nowadays, other activities are also very important.because, it is good for health.So, in my opines, I disagree with this statement.
First of all, science prove that physical activities has beneficial for health. Even, if children are physically active or strong. So, they are good in studies and further things.Moreover, continuously stuck on same thing created difficulty in regular life and the deficiency ratio of children growthing is higher. For example, India is a devloping country. The youngster of India is the back bone of country because, they are active in all fields. Just like, education, music, games, entertainment etc.
Secondly, we are living in developing county. I personally beleive that, Everyone has aimed according to his life. Someones want to cricketer.On the other hand, others want to singer, politician and so on. I think that we should, appreciate their goals, especially for children. For instances, In Pakistan, Imran khan is the true example of young generation. Firstly they represented Pakistan cricket team in all over the world. After that, they established Shaukat Khanum Hospital for Cancer patients just because of his aim, and now he is a Prime Minster of Pakistan.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying, I beleive that, childen should be goal oriented and effective in every feild or subject of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23140495868 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10824018132 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0786880819 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.125 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111812107512 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330675153178 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354535899793 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694773975573 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249828338434 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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