Dear Manager,
My name is Annie, I belong to Karachi Pakistan. Even I am writing this letter just because of I would like to complain your hotel management. I am really disappointed your service.
Marriott restaurant is one of the most reputed hotel in all over the Pakistan. In couple of days ago, it was 24- June, I had wedding anniversary and I decided to celebrate my anniversary in your restaurant. So, I booked in advance but unfortunately, when I reached there with my family the whole seats were reserved and we were on waiting list .
Furthermore, after the 45 minutes wait finally we got the seats.the whole service was too much worst just because of mismanagement and lack of coordination. When I orderd the Chinese cosine the whole meal quality was not good. Even it was not enough quantity for me and my family. My whole day was unpleasant in your restaurant.
Requested to you kindly focus your service and try to hire proverbial staff in your restaurant and reform my money.
Yours sincerely,
Annie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
...tan. Even I am writing this letter just because of I would like to complain your hotel manag...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ere reserved and we were on waiting list . Furthermore, after the 45 minutes wa...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mismanagement and lack of coordination. When I orderd the Chinese cosine the whole m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84659090909 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83911656093 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.596250511 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211421904237 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743467181409 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566198936152 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118051931081 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394548800472 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.