You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
o explain why you were at the restaurant
o describe the problems
o write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I am John Gresham, a resident of Himayatnagar. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the experience at your restaurant last Friday.
I happened to visit your restaurant on Friday 25th of March to celebrate my wedding anniversary with my family. I had made a pre reservation well in advance as there were few guests joining us for the dinner.
As I showed up at the hotel at 7 PM, I was surprised to seek that tables blocked by me were occupied by other fellow diners. Upon inquiring about the reservation, the in charge informed us to wait for about 30 minutes and apologized for the inconvenience.
Moreover, the food which we ordered was served cold and wasn’t palatable. This brought us a huge disappointment on our memorable day.
Hence,I would like to have a compensation for the consequences and the bitter experience. Please let me know if there is a way that you could address this.
Looking forward for your reply.
Thanks
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce at your restaurant last Friday. I happened to visit your restaurant on Fr...
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Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my wedding anniversary with my family. I had made a pre reservation well in adva...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...intment on our memorable day. Hence,I would like to have a compensation for t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd for your reply. Thanks John Gresham
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0530488477 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3641524194 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168535372408 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490522928607 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409913653154 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716558556033 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289986151236 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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