Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
Write at least 250 words.
A vast multitude of the society assert that women are more competent at parenting compared to men. There are others who opine that men are just as equivalent as women in bringing up their children. I certainly believe that women are more committed to role as parents owing to what many of them willingly give up career to raise their offspring and also, women better understand the needs of children.
It is an undeniable fact that the mother has a lion’s share of contribution in raising kids’ right from birth. The eternal bond between her and the child, that develops when women enters into motherhood is not replaceable. This transforms women to be more protective and attentive towards their kids. Also, new-born and infants usually at a very nascent age are dependent on the mother. This continues until the age of 12. A recent poll conducted in around 3800 schools across India indicated that 98% of the pupils approach their mother for all needs.
Furthermore, women sacrifice their careers to be responsible parent. Of course, that is possible only when there is complete cooperation from their partners and both are in one accord. It is strenuously difficult for men to strike a proper balance by juggling their demanding career with kids who need supervision. Hence, women forsake jobs to be parent. Nevertheless, some women continue to work after being parents seeking help from elders of the family, either paternal or maternal grandparents, in bringing up the young ones.
To summarize, though men and women can be good parents, women contribute a major role in the child's overall development as they deliberately disown their profession for this sake and also are usually more bonded to their children
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71087954644 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7692671501 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234889638388 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823611839803 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723178481481 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16044626038 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091321690411 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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