Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common disease or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children ?
A lot of advancements have been made in the medical field and the health sector. Vaccines have proven to prevent childhood diseases in many nations. Some support the opinion that parents should hold the right to get their children vaccinated or not. I however, believe that governments should impose strict laws to have parents immunize their children owing to the fact that it is the most effective way to control few common diseases and prevention is always considered a good practice since time immemorial
First and foremost, infants and children are the ones who are primarily affected due to the outbreak of diseases. They are vulnerable to life threatening diseases such as Dengue, Malaria and even sometimes become disabled. One such example of developing disability is Polio. Having them vaccinated helps to strengthen their immune system to fight against such diseases. Hence, vaccination can induce the increase of standards of healthy living
Additionally, prevention is better than cure. Some disease cannot be treated and make the individuals permanently disabled. One who contracted Leprosy or Polio will have to remain his life with the disability. So, by making parents to abide to the laws to immunize children will definitely make sure that none will be affected by such diseases and can eventually eliminate these dangerous diseases. Many countries have realized that healthy nation reflects healthy economy. As a result, certain vaccinations are made mandatory and also offered as a free service to curb the deadly diseases
In conclusion, imposing law to immunize children inevitably benefits as it prevents diseases and is also the proven way to eradicate some common and serious diseases
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, then, even so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36531365314 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75277742052 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1930698598 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435978913841 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128762492542 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899140231412 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254960465041 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951497875965 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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