Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common disease or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children ?
It is common knowledge that vaccines play keys role in today's world. The question, however, arises there should be a law that force parents to immunize their children or it should be their freedom of choice. In this essay I will attempt to discuss both side of the view and provide relevant examples.
First and foremost, there are many polices and legislations that force people to behave and think in appropriate way. For example, there are plenty of legislations about taxes or the way how we should drive on the roads. In my opinion it is very necessary in society because without it everybody would do whatever they want and that could create chaos. Moreover, rules and law are extremely important in country to organize people's lives. Therefore, it seems to be logic to set up a legislation about the vaccination.
On the other hand, I believe people have the right to decide about them and their children according to good pleasure of they will. In my opinion parents want always all the best for their children and relatives.
Thus, government must educate parents about the vaccinations and how important it is to protect their children for many modern diseases. Besides, parents would be aware of the profits and eventually sides effects of the vaccinations.
In conclusion, according to the examples I think that education will give better effect in society than creating another legislation that will force people to do and behave in the way that not everybody accept.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62059840494 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.786606773 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252696747508 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856587650762 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114058092461 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142990345597 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106512335961 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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