You eat at your college cafeteria every lunch time. However, you think it needs some improvements.
Dear Sir,
I am a regular visitor of your college cafeteria and I would like to recommend some changes that would make it a better place.
Firstly, I thank you for the quality of the food and service provided. The dishes are fresh and delicious especially the fish barbecue. I appreciate the hospitality of the staffs at the vending stalls and dining.
However, I would like to point out a few things which need improvement. First of all, the menu for the lunch is costly. For example, the chilly chicken costs $10 and most other dishes cost $5. Most of the students cannot afford such rates, I believe. Secondly, there is only one billing counter and this makes it extremely busy.
As mentioned earlier, I would like to propose a few suggestions to improve the overall quality of service. First of all, prices should be reduced so that all students can afford to have meals at the cafeteria. You should also consider adding more billing counters so that we will not be late for our classes.
Your prompt action in this regard will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...icken costs 0 and most other dishes cost . Most of the students cannot afford such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87765957447 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50633976808 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8988698476 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170341935072 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047084376291 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403653163251 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802583711984 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316219336474 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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