You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information
• regarding the dates
• program speaker
• accommodation and cost
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am John Gresham working as a cloud engineer at IELTS Pvt. Ltd. I am writing this letter to express my interest to be a part of the AWS reinvent seminar that would be taking place this year in Toronto. Hence, I would be requesting you to provide information about it.
As everybody is evident that the seminar is held in October of every year, can you please let me know the precise dates of the conference so I can plan my travel accordingly.
I would also like to know the details of the speakers and guest lectures who would be conducting the seminar on individual dates throughout the 5 day event.
Also, please provide the details of any accommodation that the organizers have arranged for the attendees and the cost incurred to have a booking for the complete period of the event.
This information would be a great help for me to plan my visit. Please let me know if you need any of my details. Awaiting your timely response.
Thanks
John Gresham
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64772727273 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56244330717 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2141735319 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222859150947 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764295586429 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566015852514 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119572556996 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504123200858 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.