You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for participating in a seminar on “Customer services and marketing” in America. I would like to enquire about the detailed information related dates, cost, accommodation, and program.
I would like to know the exact duration of seminar along with the dates. I would like you to notify me on the topics and speakers of the program. Since I will be travelling from India I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you? If not, could you please let me know about the hotels nearby with the profitable cost per night including meals. Further, Information regarding attending and successfully completing the discussion would be beneficial.
I am very keen on attending the conference as not only it will help gaining in depth knowledge, required skills and expertise on marketing trends and strategies on providing high quality of consumer services, but also, I will be able to contribute with my full potential in the company growth and enhancement.
I hope you will give me the opportunity to take part in the conference, and increase my understanding and experience which will in turn lead to future success in my career as well as the organisation
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, cost, accommodation, and program. I would like to know the exact duration o...
^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ration of seminar along with the dates. I would like you to notify me on the topi...
^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to gain' or 'gain'.
Suggestion: to gain; gain
...the conference as not only it will help gaining in depth knowledge, required skills and...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in my career as well as the organisation Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.133640553 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1570890114 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0835450015 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262442941585 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124273397472 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782469946853 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142257455338 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126453660203 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.