As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs.
What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from the situation?
Technology has become ubiquitous in the recent pasts. A multitude of jobs and work force are being replaced by computers. This essay will discuss that most of the Blue-collar jobs would be at risk due to this transition and will lead to increase in unemployment and crime subsequently.
First and foremost technology has already made a deep impact on the job market with many companies relying on advanced system than on man-power. These companies are investing more and more towards technology which deliver better results than humans. One such instance is the introduction of packing equipment which packs the goods 20 times higher than the number of goods packed by 5 workers in a day.
Furthermore with the advent of technology not only the jobs at factories are at stake but also jobs such as house maids, delivery boys will be replaced owing to the fact that usage of washing machines, vacuum cleaners, dish washers has increased.
These advancements will lead to unemployment and rise in crime. People lose their jobs as they are being replaced by machines and will not be able to make a living. As a result they tend to involve in crime for money. They either become robbers or blackmailers to survive. Recent study conducted by the students at The University of Oxford on crime stated that most of the criminals started committing crime due to unemployment while a very few being psychopaths.
Technology for sure, is making lives of business owners and manufacturers better avoiding human dependency. Nevertheless it is also contributing to rise in unemployment and crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...urers better avoiding human dependency. Nevertheless it is also contributing to rise in unem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, nevertheless, so, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84918519319 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3026782862 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163653070862 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574386237087 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481504104003 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854362226779 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348445889774 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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