Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

People’s interests of exploration are changing when compared to the past. A vast multitude are travelling for experience and adventure to destinations where the weather conditions are extreme. This trend is getting extremely popular. Equal proportions of benefits and drawbacks are associated to the travelers.

Firstly, the masses develop a keen interest in such places because of the experience which they haven’t felt before, while some are for adventurous expeditions such as trekking, mountain climbing. The benefits what they derive from such visits are the tourists have an opportunity to analyse and assimilate the local lifestyle in such conditions. Furthermore, they could witness the distinct flora and fauna that survive in these places. Sahara desert, for instance, which is a habitat for rare wild species like the Sahara lions and Sahara elephants attracts tourists from all parts of the world in spite of the soaring heats in the territory. Similarly, Antarctica, which is a home for thousands of penguins. Hence, tourists throng to these destinations for memorable life experiences which could not be experienced otherwise.

Despite of these advantages, tourists who visits the places of unconventional weather tend to develop health issues. The temperatures at deserts or areas closer to the poles differ drastically than usual. Some tourists may not be able to withstand the scorching heat and are effected by sun stroke, dehydration and skin allergies. Likewise, respiratory problems and cold feet when traveled to freezing places. These could also result in life loss. Several such incidents are reported every year in desserts of Rajasthan in India.

Therefore, tourism to locations like deserts and freezing cold places can be exciting and adventurous, a negative fact of health degradation has to be considered.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56183745583 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98920715452 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0258004478 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5882352941 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300610897722 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711405511282 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754503334989 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141890023994 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842738557701 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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