You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell:
– What it was about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers who should attend the course.
Dear Cameroon,
I am writing this to thank you for nominating me to the Artificial Intelligence course. The module turned out to be an immense bundle of knowledge keeping us abreast with Robotics technology.
I was under the impression that the lectures would be largely focused on basics and fundamentals of AI but they actually contained deeper insights of machine Learning. The content was well-structured and the instructors were qualified, well-informed and knowledgeable. The sessions rendered a comprehensive and thorough information on coding, Especially the 6-hour session by Anthony Hopkins on integrating Python with machines.
I definitely recommend this course to every member in our team but since we have a constraint on seat-limit, I would propose Steve and Lauren for the up-coming schedule. The course will surely boost their skill and we could leverage their expertise efficiently for the Larson and Turbo project. If you could manage to obtain a higher seat count, please nominate yourself too.
Yours Sincerely,
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, John Gresham
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67283950617 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11483218582 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.734567901235 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.964123419 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135811607317 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522963558864 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509460974304 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759201486937 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296793831655 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.