You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase.
Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and tell the manager what you would like him/her to do about it.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I have recently visited one of your store supermarket at kavuri hills, Hyderabad on 27th February, 2020 and have purchased few items in your store. I have bought items in your store like eggs, water bottles, detergents, sugar, biscuits only and made a payment through bank credit card.
After the purchased i went back to my home and was busy with my kids on regular duty and after some time i opened the bill and found the error in the bill which was made by your team member in the supermarket counter bill, the counter spoc have charged me extra money on the items which i haven’t purchased in your supermarket.
Once i have gone through the bill, i was surprised by seeing the extra deducted amount of Rs. 1200/- which i felt bad by seeing the difference amount, as far i know your supermarket is one of the well known famous in the city and how could such error can happen, i believe this type of mistakes will leads to loss of trust in your business.
Hope, you will check and regulate the bill no. (10298789) and refund my deducted amount of Rs. 1200/-.Please do the needful and looking forward for your reply and refund.
Yours faithfully,
Likhitha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'February 2020'.
Suggestion: February 2020
...rket at kavuri hills, Hyderabad on 27th February, 2020 and have purchased few items in your st...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ank credit card. After the purchased i went back to my home and was busy with ...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ids on regular duty and after some time i opened the bill and found the error in ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arged me extra money on the items which i haven’t purchased in your supermarket. ...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Once i have gone through the bill, i was surprised by seeing the extra deduc...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tra deducted amount of Rs. 1200/- which i felt bad by seeing the difference amoun...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...by seeing the difference amount, as far i know your supermarket is one of the wel...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ty and how could such error can happen, i believe this type of mistakes will lead...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...n, i believe this type of mistakes will leads to loss of trust in your business. ...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...refund my deducted amount of Rs. 1200/-.Please do the needful and looking forward for ...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d refund. Yours faithfully, Likhitha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64454976303 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38930254456 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.533191626 44.8134815571 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 16.8248392259 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199390354728 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086425472322 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605193058082 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106387043347 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315363037899 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.