You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situa

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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request a change in my campus accommodation. My name is John Gresham and I live in the Room-7 of D block in the hostel. Lately, I have been experiencing quite a lot issues with my stay.

The biggest issue is that my roommate frequently invites his friends for a party and plays loud music until late in the night often extending to 3AM. Added to this, he lacks sense of cleanliness. In spite of several attempts to reconcile on these matters, he continues to repeat them. Due to which I am unable to sleep at nights resulting in fatigue during the day and our room attracts pests causing health issues.

As the exams are nearing, I need a healthy, calm and serene environment to concentrate on my studies. Hence, I request and urge you to please allocate an individual dormitory. I would be grateful if u could act on this promptly.

Your's faithfully,

John Gresham

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70552147239 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70726680207 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5948146333 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123920972346 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403147328901 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292239015454 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728860412581 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263459142124 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.