You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the si

Essay topics:

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,

• describe the situation

• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work

• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam,

My friends and I had a meal at your restaurant last Saturday. we were celebrating the tenth anniversary of our graduation. Most of us had traveled a long way to be there that night. it was indeed a special occasion for us, as many of my friends had not seen each other for years.

we occupied the table 4 and ordered the meal of the day, and I must say – it was delicious. I cannot speak for everyone, but I had never eaten anything as good as it was. our waiter, who introduced himself as John, was all helpful and prompt. He told us everything we wanted to know about the menu, gave us some good advice, and served our table flawlessly. And we would be happy to give credits to the Chef for desserts. they were terrific – we ordered some ice cream and a carrot cake, and they were perfect.

we all are very happy for having chosen your restaurant and want to thank you a lot for the unforgettable night we had there.

All the best to you and your restaurant

Yours Sincerely

Name

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... meal at your restaurant last Saturday. we were celebrating the tenth anniversary ...
^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...eled a long way to be there that night. it was indeed a special occasion for us, a...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...had not seen each other for years. we occupied the table 4 and ordered the me...
^^
Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...never eaten anything as good as it was. our waiter, who introduced himself as John,...
^^^
Line 9, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... give credits to the Chef for desserts. they were terrific – we ordered some ice cre...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...arrot cake, and they were perfect. we all are very happy for having chosen yo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41549338437 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.3319671672 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0440794185122 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165888047024 0.0766984524023 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285648230017 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538370420857 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464220866691 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.