You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the

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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,

• describe the situation

• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work

• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir,

I am writing this to you to have your attention on a really important issue I am facing in my hostel room. Although, I am residing there for a year now, but the situation has gotten worsen these days. I really want you to address my issue, and provide me a substitute room to stay as soon as possible.

As you are well aware of the fact that I am sharing a room with my class mate John, who is also a music student. However, I have no issues with his subjects are area of interest but some of his habits can cause real damage to my progress at college. For instance, He is fond of playing very laud music during evening hours which really disturbs my work routing and the schedule of entire day. It distracts my thoughts, so that I feel difficulty at learning my lessons. Moreover, the noise is also disturbing my sleep patterns. Do you think I can perform well academically, in such type of environment?

I am not asking for a single person room, because I know it has some different criteria. So, I request you to provide me a substitute accommodation which would have been shared by some science student. In this way I can have a noise free environment.

I am pretty sure that you will keep my request into consideration and provide me with better room I the hostel.

Sincerely Yours

Robert

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to you to have your at...
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Line 19, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter room I the hostel. Sincerely Yours Robert
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Line 21, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the hostel. Sincerely Yours Robert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for instance, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52066115702 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61948273048 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5548986878 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229824727728 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756524018145 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640293242255 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145272528993 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171524275427 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.