Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Schooling is an important basic amenity of society and a large chunk of common man finances goes to it every month. As it is the basic need of everyone it should be less costly, so everyone can send their child to schools with thinking for the second time. In my opinion all the private primary educational institutes should be funded by the state. It will not only lower the tuition fee, but also ensure their strict compliance with standards set by government. In this essay I will elaborate my argument with few examples.
Firstly, in various countries both of the parents are working and a considerable amount of their annual payments is been deducted in taxes. However, they are also paying high tuition fees for private school. For instance, average fee of private sector primary school in UK is 300$/ Month. Most of the parents prefer these school due to their worthy teaching structure, which is one reason they have higher student strength comparative to the state schools.
Secondly, it is very important to have a complete check and balance on the course outline, teaching methodology and on campus facilities. The state ministers would not be able to do that without funding them, in the other case schools will be accountable to them and they have to maintain all the compliance standards. Brazil successfully implement this model and evidenced good improvement in their performances.
In the nutshell, funding primary educational institutes will lower the burden of school fee on guardians and will make the administration accountable for their performance. It will have a positive impact on the society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$300'.
Suggestion: $300
... private sector primary school in UK is 300$/ Month. Most of the parents prefer the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08118081181 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75908182356 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2601869477 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120224599476 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043518520512 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442402454035 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734721617075 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299912233983 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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