Most of the countries of the world have two governing bodies responsible to run schools in the society viz; state run schools and private schools. The private schools are mostly associated with the elite strata of the society whereas the state run schools are considered to be for the less privileged. This essay strongly agrees that government funding should be reserved for the masses as the rich class can take care of themselves and do not require government support.
To begin with, private schools cater to the niche crowd of the society who are willing to pay the extra bucks for quality of education matching the global standards. Whereas the state run schools are more focused on developing the skills of the students and train them to be able to survive and find an employment for themselves. For instance, the private school’s curriculum may differ from the state run school as they match their syllabus to the British and Spanish schools. The agenda of the government is to provide jobs to the masses whereas the focus of private schools is to prepare the students for a global level of competition. There are many under privileged people who need the support of the government. Hence, they should utilize the funds on uplifting the masses.
Furthermore, the number of private schools in a given state or country is lesser than the state run schools, as in any given society, the people at the top of the pyramid are lesser as compared to the bottom of it. So, there are a few schools only which can be overlooked by the government and divert its attention and funding to the vast majority of people who need a formal education to make them skilled enough to get an employment opportunity. The government should utilize these funds by opening more schools and increasing the literacy rate of the country. To exemplify, the funds allocated to the private schools can be used to open vocational training centers for the under privileged. Overall the resources are limited and need to be managed efficiently.
To conclude, this essay discussed how government funding is necessary for the development of the majority as compared to the elite few. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the state should concentrate all the funds necessary to provide basic education to its countrymen rather than allowing it to be utilized by some private institutes which are self sufficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 183, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...le at the top of the pyramid are lesser as compared to the bottom of it. So, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94306930693 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67794214463 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470297029703 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4765964245 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8125 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225724811491 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867057020702 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424701019886 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153682084355 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271579481733 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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