In the recent years, crime has become an important issue for many countries, as it is becoming more violent and increasing day by day. This is mainly because of lack of education and fewer job opportunities for the youth, which are correlated. This essay will discuss two main causes and suggest two solutions to curb the crime rate in any country.
The problem arises when people are uneducated, and they are unable to find work to earn a livelihood. Individuals indulge in criminal activities for fulfilling their basic needs such as food, clothing, and shelter. For instance, the rate of unlawful activities is the highest in the African continent, and it has also been observed that the literacy rate in that region is the lowest where the crime rate is the highest in the world. Because of lack of education, people are unable to find a job and make a decent living eventually resorting to crime industry.
However, there are two main strategies which the government can implement to control the crime rate. Firstly, increasing the level of education and giving vocational training, so that the men/women develop skills required for availing a job. Secondly creating more and more jobs itself. To exemplify, the Chinese have developed the manufacturing industries by creating an infrastructure for the entire world to invest and manufacture in china, resulting in an increase of 20% in Job creation.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that lack of education and fewer job opportunities are the two main reasons for the increase in crime rate, and suggested that increase in the level of education and generating additional jobs will enable the government to maintain law and order in the country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07446808511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631062794 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517730496454 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9514241568 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203450597497 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07768067883 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758336701815 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134513042218 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668668809596 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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