Obesity is a worrying concern in many advanced countries and it is predominantly affecting more children increasingly. This essay will discuss the causes of these diseases and the probable effects of the same on children.
To begin with, in advanced countries the number of fast food joints has proliferated in the past decade due to the heavy demand for ready to eat foods, which is considered to be unhealthy and less nutritious and secondly the lack of exercise in one’s daily routine. Because of the high consumption of such food and no exercise, it is imperative that the consequences will be threatening. For example it was found in a recent study that people who consumed fast food were more likely to get diabetes than those who refrained from it. The main reason for not eating healthy diet and working out is the busy lifestyle of people who are never there to provide and cook for children.
The effects of the unhealthy lifestyle and poor diet results in serious consequences such as heart diseases, pulmonary disorders and diabetes to name a few. It also makes the children lethargic and dull, hampering their growth and development. For instance, students who played any kind of sport were found to be more active and mentally strong than their counterparts. These illnesses affect the lifespan of the child and sometimes result in depression.
To conclude, this essay discussed some causes of obesity in young children and its resulting effects which not only hinders the growth and development of the child, but also makes them prone to risky and terminal diseases.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03018867925 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72920207493 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2619907151 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196407078941 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694365694039 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569408875138 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128153438043 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048135845952 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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