Money is an essential element in today's materialistic world where everyone are judged by the amount of wealth they possess. Many believe that more the money, better the life whereas, others believe that a lot of money may invite some problems. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of immense wealth and suggest the best option.
To begin with, Money is used as an exchange tool to buy anything in this world and it is important to have some money to survive. Abundance of resources is a blessing if it is utilised in the most optimum manner and if some of it used to help others. For example, Azim Premji donates half of his wealth to charitable organisation, uplifting poverty and spreading education in rural areas. One can have all the luxuries of life and travel the beautiful world with the help of money. If the good citizens hold the majority of wealth then they might utilise it to spread goodness in the society, and in contrast if the bad people accumulate abundance then they might start wars and spread other evils with their power of wealth.
On the other hand, rich people often live in a fear of losing money, they become insecure, obsessed and over protective of their wealth. Thus, causing them to spend more money in building high walls and security and cutting them off from living a life of freedom and freewill. Sometimes they are attacked by robbers and scamsters who try to steal away their money. Another problem is to keep an account of all the money and pay huge taxes and if found guilty in tax evasion, then prison might be a possible outcome. It is said that rich people often have more enemies than the poor.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that money is a boon to those who do not get swayed by its illusion and have a tendency to give back to society. In my opinion, It is a blessing to have abundant wealth and one must realise this and help the society by spreading the goodness that money can buy to make this world a better place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30457810606 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7150531813 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313070254096 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100693596506 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630607618274 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188614731654 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278815525065 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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