Should private schools receive government funding?Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Essay topics:

Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is the basic necessity of any country. The subsidy to the private schools by the government has always been controversial. I am of a firm belief that no subsidy should be given to the private schools from the administration. I would like to discuss various factors to support my view point.
Education has a very crucial role for the development of any country. Government should not support the private schools whereas those can be utilized in making the government schools more resourceful. Public should start believing in the government schools as the tuition and development fee in the schools is very affordable by any citizen. In many countries, the education in schools is free of cost. More and more funds should be allocated for the government schools to make them more developed and high in curriculum. In India, a lot of improvement is required in government schools and private schools already charge too exorbitant. Government in India should allocate high funds to improve the infrastructure, resource, and curriculum and subsidize the tuition fee for the underprivileged children.
However, many countries are deprived of good education in government schools due to low remuneration and education. Private schools play a very important role in such situations and in such cases government can support the private education for the wellbeing if the country. Private schools levy too heft fees which every family cannot afford, if the government will fund the school, the benefits of the subsidy can be availed by the children.
To close, emphasis on the government schools should be more so that children can enjoy high education and infrastructure.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this can; those cans
...not support the private schools whereas those can be utilized in making the government sc...
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Message: Did you mean 'to heft'?
Suggestion: to heft
...ng if the country. Private schools levy too heft fees which every family cannot afford, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oy high education and infrastructure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27137546468 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03602559106 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468401486989 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5905425458 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260293683524 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107785030022 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476170551493 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16841591838 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531579866471 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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