A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

Essay topics:

A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

Health is our greatest wealth. Fit human beings can be referred as individuals who eat healthy food, involved in physical activity and do not takes a lot of trauma. To remain healthy, just a basic lifestyle is to be put in action. There are numerous ways with which individuals can stay healthy.
To highlight the couple of ways in my country which people follow are: - Firstly, Dividing the big meals into small portions, diving the breakfast in three small meals but before 11 am. Similarly, proportioning the lunch and dinner into a portion which can be finished before 8 pm in the evening is good. Eating late night food gives the body less time to digest which again becomes harmful or the body. Secondly, involving oneself into physical exercises even if going to the gym is not possible, walking, taking stairs instead of escalators/elevators can help. Sharing the stress with colleagues or talking to the person causing stress is very useful.
Also, Government can initiate the basic awareness sessions to keep oneself healthy, one to one doctor meetings to discuss the dietary plans or subsidizing organic foods. Introducing gym equipment’s at public parks. Formation of cycle tracks to reduce the pollution as well as helping the public to do physical activity.
To close, there are innumerous ways which can help any individual to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Even in my country, Government is also supporting various factors to reduce the risk of vulnerable diseases. My country has regained a good ranking in the latest survey of the healthiest country.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0888030888 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84849176327 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4007337463 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116404727877 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348178283275 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366348278139 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638808264714 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273916360102 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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