In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
The behaviour of an individual represents the reflection of one’s personality and values. Children are the foundation of tomorrow’s future. Many countries have a very stringent method to develop the conduct of the children and at the same time, other countries follow a very lenient way of upbringing a child. I am of a viewpoint that children should be nurtured with leniency and care with very basic rules to be followed.
There are various factors which support my agreement. Firstly, children are very delicate, they are like an empty computer, which is programmed by the values and traditions we exhibit and follow. They adopt a behaviour which they see in their surroundings. If we will lay the foundation of the stringent rules, they will also become harsh and brutal in their actions. Their free-thinking will be blocked. To state an example, if a child will be berated for not following a protocol at the public park, the child may hesitate to visit the park. Due to which the physical activity of a kid may be hindered and the behavior may become closed.
To contradict, Rules are the basics which develop at a very early stage. It is what which makes a person disciplined in their actions but if established wrongly leads to a negative development of a personality.
To conclude, Rules are essential in one’s life but developing them at a right age and time is more critical. Countries should understand that a child is very gentle to imbibe the strict conduct. They are to be dealt in a very different manner to save our future. They are our tomorrow’s vision so should be dealt with a soft hand.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85663082437 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90083533605 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1124732834 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263076026022 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786863686402 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701008809942 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155036811862 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733962595408 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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