Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?
Violence causes destruction to humanity. Many of the people are of an opinion that ferocity shown in any form is harmful to any age group. However many people contradict the statement with a reason that the same has an important effect. I am of a viewpoint that the aggressiveness has a destructing effect on any person.
Although, technology has erupted taking the most significant role in our daily lives and it has its pros and cons attached to it. Children and youth are too much inclined to computer games. There are many games available on the internet which involves fights and brutality. Our children are learning the same and try to apply the same while they have a fight with anyone. Their behaviour is becoming cruel and unpleasant towards others. There are many youths who have many celebrities as their role models and they try to copy their acts and lifestyle. The violent acts that are shown on the television also impact the mindset of them. The damage of the aggressiveness can be seen in the daily acts of the children and youth. For example, there was a mobile game, Blue Whale, which was very violent in nature; it had many instructions which made many youths to suicide.
On the other hand, it has a very small effect on your cognitive thinking; it teaches you self-defence and how to act in a violent and stressful situation. The violence also gives you a solution and pro-activeness to save yourself in such situations.
To close, violence has never been accepted in any civilization. It has always leaded a path of destruction. The Government should also create awareness and keep a check on the technology and media to ban or set criteria for the content being available to society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78716216216 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74106015851 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.687791319 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7222222222 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171301116319 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472652728272 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384000102301 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968158221339 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519893794019 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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