You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter,
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
This is in connection to the continuation of the part-time course at your college. I am a 1st-year student of the marketing course which runs alternate days in a week in the evening. I have recently been promoted in my job which requires me to relocate to another city.
I joined this course due to enhance my skills and it has really worked out well, I have been promoted with additional responsibilities but the company wants me to work at the client’s location in another city. I will not be able to continue the course and moreover, I have already completed all the semesters and it is only training part was left.
I would like to request to consider my new job as a part of the training and assess me for the same. I will be available for a one to one discussion which is a last exam of the course.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
Megha Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uires me to relocate to another city. I joined this course due to enhance my sk...
^
Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...client's location in another city. I will not be able to continue the course...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... it is only training part was left. I would like to request to consider my ne...
^
Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he training and assess me for the same. I will be available for a one to one disc...
^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Thanking you Yours faithfully, Megha Gupta
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, really, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54819277108 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74361053206 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6319789383 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195323204804 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848872228703 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762143102352 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968384523127 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390835283695 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.