You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dis-satisfaction with my room-mate and request for another accommodation next term.
My room-mate has friends visiting all the time. They make a lot of noise which makes it extremely difficult for me to focus on my studies. They party till late nights, play loud music and leave all the junk around. I have tried speaking to my room-mate regarding the same and suggested them to sit in the common lounge but nothing has changed and he has left my concern unheard.
I have examinations coming up next term and it would be very inconvenient for me to study in such an environment. I would prefer moving to a personal room next term so that I don’t have to face a similar situation again.
I request you to look into this this as a matter of urgency and please book me in a personal room for next term.
In anticipation of your favorable response.
Thanks and Regards
Sumit
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for me to study in such an environment. I would prefer moving to a personal room ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to face a similar situation again. I request you to look into this this as a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
... again. I request you to look into this this as a matter of urgency and please book ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72781065089 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74158046319 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8230078346 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135842486967 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451334556558 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588669121745 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794600505792 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741196963882 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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