Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it is not appropriate to use animals for such experiments.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
use of animals for medicine testing is a very importamt subject and there are various people with different viewpoints as is this the right practice to follow or animals should be left aside. considering both prospects, i have noted my viewpoint in the paragraphs below:
there are both pros and cons in context to animal use for medicines. On one hand, all livings beings on this planet have equal rights and it is not advised to kill someone for the benefit of the other. it is morally inethical to put an animal to rest and a lot animal awareness organisations will not take it in a positive manner and raise concerns over the same.
on the other hand, the practice of using animals for medicine testing have mutiple advantages. Firstly, it helps in curbing the animal population. when such tests are performed, such factors are kept into consideration. animals that are abundant in numbers are often used to carry out such experiments. it would not be a feasible decision to experiment on animals that are already scarce and could be shortly extinct. Another factor for testing on animals could be that it raises comparatively less concerns over issues that are subject to sentimental values. people will be less hurt if animals are used for carrying out experiments whereas it not a wise decision to risk humans.
To summarise, i am more inverted towards the viewpoint that animal testing is a fair practice considering the above mentioned points. It is not right to hurt human values but there is not an other way out to this practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94331983806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70091771104 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4974746647 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407309032669 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161068880294 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942519202698 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231830930607 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103714756748 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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