Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it is not appropriate to use animals for such experiments.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it is not appropriate to use animals for such experiments.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Exploitation of vermin for medicinal experiments is bolstered by manifold people, while others deem that animals should not be used for these kind of testings. This essay encapsulates arguments for the view points with a plausible conclusion.

On the one hand, creatures should not be utilized by humans for their own benefits because it is against the moral values. That is to say that, every living organism on the planet has equal rights to live their own life. In addition to that, in some cases, ramifications may be different than it may cause to humans. Therefore, from this view point, it is worthless to exploit animals for personal advantages. However, I believe that tamed animals should be used for the medicinal research due to numerous reasons.

On the other hand, there are plethora of reasons to uphold the notion of animal usage in medical experiments. Firstly, it is one of the safest way to perform experiments without harming other humans. For example, if few rodents are died during the testing then it will not have huge impact on the society as compared to other human beings. Secondly, exploitation of fauna is a better method to curb the population of them, otherwise, they may cause devastating effect to various Eco-system. To exemplify, rabbits are utilized in medical research which is one of the prominent reasons to stop increment of their population or else they may cause catastrophic implications on crops. Therefore, utilization of vermin for medicinal testing is preferred.

By agglomerating above mentioned factors, it is concluded that although use of animals is against the moral ethics and result may not be effective, I think creatures should be exploited because it is the safest practice as well as animal population can be controlled through this method. Furthermore, it is recommended that people should consider all the consequences that are concomitant with the experiments before performing it.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...eem that animals should not be used for these kind of testings. This essay encapsulates ar...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...e cases, ramifications may be different than it may cause to humans. Therefore, from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19682539683 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90924279248 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1333751568 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5333333333 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30954993132 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108831647703 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910500017173 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199956208798 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819520685784 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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