A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job
Dear Malik,
I hope you are doing well. I have received your letter where you mentioned that you are in dire need of a job and I just happened to come across one.
The vacancy has been posted only this week for an Assistant Project Coordinator in a Real state firm. It will mostly involve communicating with clients overseas, keeping track of tasks to be done and gathering feedback from stakeholders. You might occasionally have to visit the site to conduct meetings with the supervisor.
Since you have completed your Management in Business Administration, I think you will be the perfect candidate for the post. In addition, during your course you were engaged in various outdoor activities which demonstrates that site visits would not be a problem for you.
In order to apply for the job you will have to email your resume at realtors@email.com along with a copy of your academic certificates.
I hope this information has been helpful to you. Please let me know if you need further information. All the best with your application.
Best regards,
Mitu
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96116322656 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9136621363 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431698629182 0.216113520407 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150550340896 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102067464531 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250775210824 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856737040927 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.