A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Sally,
Hi how are doing? I am doing fine here in Manila, I am grateful that you have invited me to visit you in Amsterdam next March.
I am already excited since that this could be a new experience for me. Because of the culture of the Dutch is quite distinctive in nature , I want to learn their activities in weekdays and in weekends, their national sports and visit some special places.
We could also visit some of the famous restaurants in your neighborhood. Your family very hospitable since that they have agreed to invite me and stay at your family house. If it is not much I am going to buy something memorable for them you can tell me what things they want to receive.
You can call me at my number 09128378217 or email me at bill@mail.com, so that I could buy the best gift for your family as a token of gratitude.
Okay I look forward seeing you there take care.
Best wishes,
Bill
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hi how are doing? I am doing fine here i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the Dutch is quite distinctive in nature , I want to learn their activities in wee...
^^
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... special places. We could also visit some of the famous restaurants in your neighborhood...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48214285714 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50064240197 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3413901331 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209808931732 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768370819914 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593306345806 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119704938364 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502309274038 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.