One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time.
Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.
Dear Sally,
Hi How are you? I am doing okay here. I am writing to you because I will be a bit late to pick you up when you arrive here at Manila.
I am already excited since that you finally accepted to visit me here in Manila. Unfortunately I have some errands to go to so I am going to pick you up in the airport around 1:00pm that is 30 minutes late.
Do not worry since that I will try my best to arrive at airport as fast as I can. You can wait for me at a coffee shop in front of the airport and tell me how can I recognize that it was you. What kind of clothing will you wear? or the color of your scarf? I will wear a red scarf with a Manchester United logo so that you identify me much faster.
You can call me in this number 09928731723 or email me at bill@mail.com when you arrive here in Manila.
Okay, I look forward seeing you.
Best wishes,
Bill
Comments
Dear Rekha,
Dear Rekha,
Hope you are doing well.
I am very glad to know that you are arriving in my city for a week. The letter which you sent to me has all the details of your travel. My parents are also happy to hear this.
Unfortunately, I would like to inform you that I am also traveling for 3 days due to some family function and my return date is the same as yours, but my flight will reach one hour late. So I would request you to please wait till my arrival. My parents and I would love to meet you and also we will drop you at your destination afterward.
Here I would like to suggest that you can rest in the waiting lounge and taste the special variety of food there. As soon as I reach I will come to see you directly. As we have never met earlier, so I will tell you how to recognize me,I will be wearing a white T-shirt and blue jeans. I am 5.6 feet tall and I will also hold a card of your name.
Waiting to meet you eagerly
Yours affectionately
Priyanka
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u up when you arrive here at Manila. I am already excited since that you final...
^
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...u. What kind of clothing will you wear? or the color of your scarf? I will wear a ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.99435028249 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20201318722 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7368702142 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.3846153846 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341488274458 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123186707627 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827709335639 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18959605542 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842296010055 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.27 8.71597938144 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.71 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.