Write a letter to a long time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her goodbye party
Why you will not be able to attend, how you enjoyed working with him/her and how will keep contact with him her
Dear Sally,
How are you doing there right now? I am doing fine here at Manila, I am sorry it took me a while before I could write to you.
I am sorry that I cannot go to your goodbye party this coming Sunday. I have a job interview with the manager of the company since they are planning to promote me to a position of Marketing Head. It pains me that I could not attend one of your most important event in your life.
It was just yesterday since I remember working with you. We were both neophytes back then I could not finish some drafts and you on the other hand cannot write a memorandum to the executives. It was a funny yet inspiring experienced with you, I really enjoyed working with you and I had learned a lot of things from you.
Even if we are parting ways right now I will always be your best friend. You can always email me at bil@yahoo.com or give a me call in this number 12345678. Also you can always drop by the house or even stay for a vacation if you want to.
Take care sally never stop inspiring people, Write back soon.
Best Regards,
Bill
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me a while before I could write to you. I am sorry that I cannot go to your good...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your goodbye party this coming Sunday. I have a job interview with the manager o...
^
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'me'?
Suggestion: a; me
...lways email me at bil@yahoo.com or give a me call in this number 12345678. Also you ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...give a me call in this number 12345678. Also you can always drop by the house or eve...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24637681159 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24624694446 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613526570048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5176291422 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6153846154 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247249417097 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799070212775 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064379897361 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113576719682 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742345527027 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.