A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you did there and what

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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you did there and what the food was like.

Dear Jay,

Wow! It has been long time since last we wrote. Hope you family is well and things are going your way. I am delighted to know that you have planned to go for holiday and have asked me to recommend for a destination. Well I think Manali is worth visiting place, I have been there and it is an amazing place.

Let me explain you in detail. In May 2014 I visited to Manali along with my wife for my honeymoon trip.I loved this trip for several reasons. I stayed in Blue Radisson Hotel. The tourism department of the hotel has arranged everything for us. It is three star hotel and quite luxurious with plethora of amenities inside in it including swimming pool. We visited Rohtang pass which is almost 300mtr above ground level and it was an awesome experience because of snowfall. We also enjoyed Paragliding in Sollang Valley which is at 10km from the city center. As Manali is known for delicious North Indian dishes, we tried all types of parathas in our menu and this menu is available in almost all the restaurants in Manali. In simple words, Manali is the best place to visit.

It was the memorable trip for me and I would recommend this destination to everyone. I hope you will enjoy your holiday trip and please write me if you need any further details.

Best Regards,
Rakesh Soni

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...long with my wife for my honeymoon trip.I loved this trip for several reasons. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54430379747 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35899320432 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6348109726 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3125 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257789034552 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810294968186 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105875537314 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213962088193 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102591963001 0.0580467560999 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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