You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college.In your letter:•say what job you have applied for•explain why you want this job•suggest what information the teacher should include

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college.

In your letter:
• say what job you have applied for
• explain why you want this job
• suggest what information the teacher should include

Dear Mr.Selvin,

How are you? Hope you are fine and things are going well in the college. I still remember you unique way of learning math’s skills which has really helped a lot in my engineering studies. I am writing this letter to ask a favor from you - to write a reference letter for me as I am applying for a job.

As I am due to graduate next month, I have applied for Civil Engineer job in one of the most reputed construction company in Mumbai. As per their pre-qualification criteria for an interview they need a letter of recommendation. Every fresh graduate has a dream to start their job with well reputed company to build strong foundation for their professional job career. That dream has come true, as I have been invited from most reputed company Shapoorji Pallonji to apply for Civil Engineer position.

Let me explain the content of this letter in detail. I would appreciate if you include the information about my overall academic track record. You could describe my dedication and pro-active approach to complete any task given to me, for example. In addition to this, you could include information of my software skills and programming knowledge that would be excellent.

Would you please send me this letter by courier by end of this week? I would be grateful as I have very tight deadline of submitting this reference letter to this company.

Thank you in advance, I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Selvin
Dear Mr.Selvin, How are you? Hope you are fine and ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, well, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85375494071 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80375778592 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0836055017 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455821685273 0.216113520407 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143663737006 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741697420168 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250024388236 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773511646926 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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