Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
These days, parents are becoming increasingly lenient. They do not impose sufficient discipline on their children and in some cases buy them too many things. This essay will outline how it is not good way to raise children and its negative effects on them in future.
One of the main reason permitting children to do anything is not good way of parenting is that children may develop to grow as an immature adult and may lack the sense of responsibility. The parents themselves give sense of entitlement and control over them to their children by fulfilling whatever they need. The children become mischievous as he understands that he will not be punished for any wrong doing. Also buying too much toys for them makes their children materialistic and does not offer the same change to develop social skills like sharing. For instance, children start to shape and develop themselves in their own way without proper discipline or principles which can be dangerous in their adult stage. In short, parents must impose certain rules and discipline to encourage their kids to develop into mature and responsible adult.
If the parents continue to do parenting in such permissive style, their children will grow with different values and morals than those of stringent parents. Children who are never forced to rectify their mistakes will end up continuing to make bigger mistakes and may lead to do something which can be proved disaster in their life at a later stage. Without any discipline and boundaries children often tends to poor grades in their school. For example, if the children are not being taught to avoid the constant watching of mobile or any digital screens for longer hours they may develop poor learning skills and inferior personality which is not good for their academic and social life in their adult stage. In other words, lenient way of parenting has adverse effects on their children in their adulthood such as poor learning skills and low academic grades.
In conclusion, although parents always want to fulfil their children wish, they must set certain rules and boundaries while raising them. If the parents fail to impose basic level of discipline it can have adverse effect on children’s adult life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04043126685 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58285728688 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514824797844 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2651773409 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490939061292 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177197520259 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674017161587 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328645140418 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290503010647 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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