Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
The relation of money to happiness is always being debatable. It is a common held belief that personal satisfaction cannot be correlated to the wealth .It is hard to define happiness fully as every individual have his own definition. This essay will discuss the difficulty in defining happiness and different ways by which people can be happy.
One of the main reason for difficulty in defining happiness is that each individual has different parameters to define happiness. The interest and degree of satisfaction vary from individual to individual. For instance, a soldier fighting for his country will be happy when he successfully protects his country whereas a common man becomes happy if he is able to bring happiness to his family. So people feel happy when their needs are fulfilled. In addition, as the needs changes over the years the factors influencing their happiness also change make it more difficult to define. For instance, a chocolate can make child happy, but it does not mean much for adults. In other words, the needs of individuals vary from person to person which makes difficult to define happiness.
There are various factors which can contributes to one’s happiness. One of the factor that leads to individual’s happiness is through their work. For instance, a doctor treating patients in underdeveloped country might get little rewards in terms of money but he might feel satisfied from his work for serving the society. Another contributing factor is love which one receive from his family members and friends. The people in individual’s life are loving and caring, they tend to feel happy. In short, factors like love and job satisfaction are some of the factors which can contribute to one’s happiness.
To conclude, happiness cannot be defined in particular as it depends on the individual needs. However, we can outline several factors which can contribute to individual’s happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in particular, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01494060703 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2535401412 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308248463946 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113127657262 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792986604144 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227281468402 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872281469367 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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